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Post by Peregrine on Feb 5, 2010 22:37:50 GMT -5
Ok so after reading your bio I have this idea. Your lion Scar, takes Vernost as a slave, Vallion does not like him at all. So Vallion, rather than risk his brother's disaproval hires Wylie to kill Vernost, for that is what Wylie does, she is an assasine(sp?). Scar: Master Vallion: 2nd in Command Wylie: Love interest/assasine Vernost: slave Step: 1. Have Scar take Vernost as slave 2.Vallion dislikes his bro's decision 3. Vallion hires Wylie to kill Vernost 4. Infiltrating the heard Wylie puts on a different persona 5. Scar falls in love with her second persona 6.Her real nature attracts to Vallion and falls in love with the 'real Wylie 7. Wylie ceases the oportunity to make the brother's fight 8. They relise her intend and attack her, she runs off 9. Vernost is still clueless 10. you decide on what remains of the love they had for Wylie I think it will be interesting if you like the idea
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Post by tinypup on Feb 5, 2010 22:59:33 GMT -5
So let me get this straight, Scar takes Vernost as a slave, Vallion does not like his decision so Vallion hires Wylie to kill Vernost, Scar falls in love with Wylie(?), Vallion then falls in love with Wylie(?), Wylie makes the brothers get into a fight, They realise what she was planning, then attack her, Vernost is still clueless.
So that's is what you want to happen? I just need to get that clear. And also some parts of the plan I put (?) next to it, was because I wasn't sure if that is what you meant.
And also, what breed is Vernost and Wylie?
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Post by Peregrine on Feb 5, 2010 23:03:03 GMT -5
Vernost I believe is a tiger, and Wylie is a Jaguar..though I may be changing that..to the other name I forget what it is Panther maybe idk, we'll see. Uhh and yeah sorta, accept Scar is falling in love with the persona of Wylie, see she is 'under cover' so to speak so she puts a different personality on herself, while Vallion, knowing the real wylie loves her. The whole thing is completely up to you though, I don't mind either way if its rejected by you or not
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Post by tinypup on Feb 5, 2010 23:05:32 GMT -5
It would be odd however for 2 lions to fall in love with a panther. But yeah, sure, I like the idea.
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Post by Peregrine on Feb 5, 2010 23:07:56 GMT -5
hmm, yeah I guess, though on this site did I say any breeds could fall in love for the sake of it being interesting...I think so..I'll check and tell ya in the cbox
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